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Not bad

Well the only thing that bugged me was the stick figure animation mixed with charicter animation, didnt really work. Also when he pulled off the guys hand, it made a "pop" noise, it really didnt work, you should of given more of a ripping noise instead of a popping a bubble noise. OTher than that, use 22 fps on your next movie to make it extra smoothe.

PoorBoy88 responds:

I had it set to 20, all was perfect on my computer, the music exually matched the movie, but as soon as it hit newgrounds the Fr droped to a mear 15, idk wtf happend but o well, and what wrong with mixing styles, too bad the sequal will have to wait, I got another project for the both of them.

GREAT MOVIE!

Wow, I dont usually mark this high of a grade, but this is really great! I mean your animation and frame by frame is the best I have seen yet! The best Clock film I have ever seen! This was like a real cartoon and the music was great. This was just a really good movie, very appealing to the eye and it must of taken alot of time to make. This really deserves this grade. Keep it up man!

Sherbalex responds:

Hehe thanks :) And I guess a week and a half-2 weeks is a long time. Felt long to me.

Good Start

Hey man, I see your working on it. A tip, dont keep submitting a movie over and over until its done, cuz then you get low reviews when its not done. Anyway, I cant wait to see whats next. Im telling you folks, this is going to be awsome when its done, antiqkk has shown me some previews of drawing and such, its gonna be a big hit. Cant wait until you finish it. Nice job so far.

Daniel Bachine
www.BachineAnimations.tk

antiqkk responds:

Hey dude. I have no clue why I keep submitting whole load of work all the time, which is pointless. Maybe cause I'm bored and tired of blamming stickmen movies.

Not bad.

A nice start. I think this would be good with some background information. Also those zombies were pretty awsome, I gotta tell you. I really like the music in the beginning and end, creepy. If you made this like a full lenght movie with a plot and everything, it would be dope. Next time, take your time in drawing out every singe detail, and the main charicter could loose about 15 pounds off his chin, lol. Yeah, not a bad start, but you can maybe redo it into a whole other film?

toxicbomb responds:

I know I know. Thanks fer the criticism!!! HAhaha 15 pounds(you're right though)

I see Improvement!

Wow man, I really didnt expect this kind of work from you! You have come along way since Franks Wild Years ( a personal favorite). Im glad to see your doing this good work. The window breaking scene was really good. You still kept your style, and thats cool. Happy Mothers Day! lol.

Sundial responds:

Hey! pleasure reading another one of your fine reviews, bachine. yeah I was happy with the window thing, and then the anime-style split-screen thing. That was fun and challenging to animate. Thanx!

Whut??

Wow, it took five artists to put that all together. I dont know how you got this onto the front page. I though this was ok for a begginer, but it seems youve been making these for quite some time so I dont know why it looks so dissasembled. The art is not very detailed, not much movement just slides and text. I dont know why it took so many people to make it. I think your animation skills need work, but the storyline is ok. But this definetely is nothing that needs to be on the front page, just amature work.

mmark-oldflash responds:

Uh, can you read. I made the movie. Those other artists are just the people who's music I used from the audio portal. And I don't think amatures could concieve a story like this one.

Great

Wow, impressive. Hey, what font did you use at the end? It looked tight. Funny movie!

Klaasmekoy responds:

The font on the end is Dark Crystal Outline happy now ?

Blah!

Bad ending, the story went no-where. It just started off with no info of how they died, whats happening or no background info. Plus where are the police going? In some house to find a dead body thats alive? Try thinking of a story plot a little more next time.

Rubbertje responds:

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